Update docs/integrations/self-hosted-gitlab.md

Co-authored-by: Karan Singh <[email protected]>

Author: guritfaq

docs/integrations/self-hosted-gitlab.md

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-This page walks you through integrating your own Self Managed GitLab with CodeRabbit.
+This page guides you through the process of integrating your Self-Managed GitLab with CodeRabbit.
 
-To start the integration we need some information, this is required for first time to setup our CodeRabbit user and to create CodeRabbit application in your ___domain. Once this is set next time, You can directly login using Oauth2 flow
+To initiate the integration, we require specific information. This is essential for the initial setup of our CodeRabbit user and the creation of the CodeRabbit application within your ___domain. Once this setup is complete, you can log in directly using the OAuth2 flow.
 
 ### **Step 1: Getting Started**